tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4717212321192490853.post9312312865560800..comments2023-10-24T09:33:56.674-04:00Comments on THIRD FACE: We find the world's answers in the oddest places...Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4717212321192490853.post-65400181556502669332010-07-21T11:56:06.595-04:002010-07-21T11:56:06.595-04:00wow... "Waiting on the Wlord to Pee" ma...wow... "Waiting on the Wlord to Pee" may just be my first book title... haha, you see what I did there? Pretended as if I'll get a book deal, then pushing it overboard to think I'd get a second. lol.Scott Oliverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05230684203646014273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4717212321192490853.post-63198366634782333702010-07-17T01:21:22.398-04:002010-07-17T01:21:22.398-04:00Wow! Remember we talked about poems that follow o...Wow! Remember we talked about poems that follow one thread the whole way through? You craftily avoided doing that by first introducing a narrator watching his girlfriend piss which is in itself awesome. This makes me wonder what thoughts/images it would unlock in you if you could somehow see the whole world pee. Thanks for this, brotherman.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com